An excellent conclusion
This ties into number 2 very nicely. The melody has now lost its 'haunting' effect and becomes more 'enigmatic'. Sweet, sweet stuff. ^_^
Althought part 1 had a few flaws, part 3 is a strong finish that more than makes up for the fact. Overall, I must say "Melodies" gets a 9.5/10 in my book. Great job! Keep up the good work!
This was an excellent transition from part 1 to part 3. The melody in part 2 shows similarity to that of part 1, but is much more haunting, enigmatic, showing both ties to and variation from the first part.
It still feels trance-like, but is totally different in style. This was good, though, this was very good, especially for a transitory part.
First part of 3...
This was good. I like the three "memories" pieces, though I must say I think the other two were stronger than this.
The melody itself is really neat. I liked it and the sound it gave.
For some reason, the bass line in this one could be better -- it distracted me a lot from the actual melody. Perhaps it just didn't fit my tastes.
Still, I would recommend this to others, especially since it ties into Memories 2 and Memories 3, and both of those are excellent in quality.
This was good
First of all, I like the length of this song. 3 minutes 25 seconds of techno fun.
One purpose of techno is musical experimentation -- I can hear a great deal of that in this piece. One part of the melody seems to be intentionally off the beat, and depending on how the author plays this unusual thing, it can be either strengthening or weakening. It's also a matter of personal taste -- and sometimes it's an aquired taste. Best to let viewers decide how they feel about the off-beat section for themselves.
Some sections tended to be kinda repeptitive, but given the length of this song, I'm not gonna blame you for that. Perhaps more variation in the melody could solve this problem.
Still, this is a nifty song, I'm definitely keeping it. I love your techno style -- keep up the good work. ^^
Another great one
First thing I'm going to say -- I like the melody. It's really neat. All your techno stuff is great. ^_^
One problem I had with this -- the way the base kinda 'pulses' heavily in the background sounded really aggrivating on my headphones. I kinda have sensitive ears, so I'm not going to dock many points just because it didn't suit me entirely.
I listened again without headphones, it doesn't sound as bad -- some songs just aren't made for headphones. The extreme variation in base does tend to drown out other things, so I only gave you a 7 for clarity, but I think the thing was very original, so I gave you full credit on that account.
It's good, and certainly just because I have problems with the baseline doesn't mean other people will. I reccommend this one to others. Good job! 4/5
This is good too!
I really liked how this song picked up. Also, the percussion had some insteresting parts that I liked. (especially around 1:12 or so)
Good music. I like your stuff -- can't wait to hear more. ^_^
What I heard was good
What I heard was really good. Perhaps you could do something about the song length, though? If this were around a minute or two long, this would be an absolutely wonderful submission
I found it interesting. I myself am a fan of techno/trance, so I suppose my high marks might be a bit biased, but this flows very well. Nothing feels contrived, nothing feels un-natural, and it flows well. A nice beat, and I noticed you managed to tie the beginning and end together, which is nifty, and might be useful if a flash artist wanted to use it. Great stuff, man, keep at it. ^_^
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